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 						My name is Hayden Hargreaves, and I am a software engineering student at
 						<Link href="https://prescott.erau.edu" text="Embry Riddle Aeronautical University." />
 						I am also pursing a minor in Cyber Security. I am a freshmen who intends to graduate in Spring,
-						2028. I have a passion for building things and seeing my ideas come to life.
+						2028. I have a passion for building and seeing my ideas come to life.
 					</p>
 					<p class="my-4 w-3/4 text-gray-200">
-						In my free time, when I am not coding, I like to workout, I play airsoft, I love
+						In my free time I like to workout, play airsoft, go mountain biking, and play video
-						mountain biking, and I play video games when I need to relax. I have been playing
+						games. I have been playing airsoft for nearly two years and have loved it from day one!
-						airsoft for nearly two years and have loved it from day one! I own countless airsoft
+						I own countless airsoft guns which include an
-						guns which include an
 						<span class="text-blue-300">Elite Force H&amp;K 416 A5</span>, an
-						<span class="text-blue-300"> Elite Force 1911 TAC</span>,
+						<span class="text-blue-300"> Elite Force 1911 TAC</span>, a
 						<span class="text-blue-300">JAG Arms Scattergun Super CQB</span>, and many more.
 					</p>
 					<p class="my-4 w-3/4 text-gray-200">
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 				<div class="my-8 h-fit w-full">
 					<h2 class="py-4 text-2xl font-[600] text-blue-300">Experience</h2>
 					<p class="mb-4 w-3/4 text-gray-200">
-						I have been programming for nearly <span class="text-blue-300">half a decade</span> now.
+						I have been programming for nearly <span class="text-blue-300">half a decade</span>. I
-						I started programming in high school where I learned web development using HTML, CSS,
+						started programming in high school where I learned web development using HTML, CSS, and
-						and some basic JavaScript. From there, I started to learn software development basics
+						some basic JavaScript. From there, I started to learn software development basics using
-						using <span class="text-blue-300">Java</span>. Since then, I have learned to love
+						<span class="text-blue-300">Java</span>. Since then I have learned to love
 						<Link href="https://go.dev" text="Go" /> and have dipped my feet into the water of countless
 						programming languages.
 					</p>
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 						<span class="text-blue-300">Linux</span>
 						exclusively. I have used countless distributions ranging from Ubuntu to Arch Linux, but I
 						have settled on <span class="text-blue-300">NixOS</span> as my daily driver. During this
-						journey I developed a "need for speed" and this lead to me to
+						journey I developed a "need for speed" and this led to me to
 						<span class="text-blue-300">Neovim</span>. Inspired by
 						<Link
 							text="The Primeagen"
 							href="https://x.com/ThePrimeagen?ref_src=twsrc%5Egoogle%7Ctwcamp%5Eserp%7Ctwgr%5Eauthor"
-						/>
+						/>, I have discovered a love for software toolchain development and have been building
-						, I have developed a love for developer toolchain development and have been building many
+						many small Neovim plugins to help my day-to-day life as a developer.
-						small Neovim plugins to help me in my day-to-day life as a developer.
 					</p>
 					<p class="w-3/4 text-gray-200">
 						I have been employed as a Staff Accountant at
-						<span class="text-blue-300">Bottom Line Business Solutions</span> since 2020. In 2023,
+						<span class="text-blue-300">Bottom Line Business Solutions (BLBS)</span> since 2020. In
-						following a hack at the previous data hosting company, I was tasked with developing a
+						2023, following a hack at the previous data hosting company, I was tasked with
-						new data hosting solution. I developed a custom solution using Go and host it on an on
+						developing a new data hosting solution. I developed a custom solution using Go and it is
-						site Linux server. Implementing a strong partial and complete backup system and
+						hosted on a Linux server on site. Implementing a strong partial and complete backup
+						system and
 						<Link
 							text="RAID 10"
 							href="https://www.techtarget.com/searchstorage/definition/RAID-10-redundant-array-of-independent-disks"
@@ -92,38 +91,38 @@
 					</p>
 					<p class="my-4 w-3/4 text-gray-200">
 						While working on the data hosting solution, I developed an interest in server management
-						and have since been managing the company's server, as well as my own <span
+						and have since been managing the BLBS server, as well as my own <span
 							class="text-blue-300"
 						>
 							personal server</span
 						>. Both servers run Ubuntu Server and can be accessed remotely and securely using SSH
-						keys. This has been a great learning experience and has helped me to develop a strong
+						keys. This has been a great learning experience and has helped me develop a strong
 						understanding of server management and the Linux kernel.
 					</p>
 					<p class="my-4 w-3/4 text-gray-200">
 						In September of 2023, I was hired by the <span class="text-blue-300">
 							Backcountry Horsemen of California
 						</span>
-						to rebuild their website. They wanted a website that was modeled after their previous site
+						to rebuild their website. They wanted it to be modeled after their previous site from the
-						from the 90's. I developed a new website using raw HTML and TailwindCSS because there was
+						90's. I developed the site using raw HTML and TailwindCSS because there was no need for anything
-						no need for anything fancy for a static website. Plus, I did not have access to their server,
+						fancy for a static website. Plus, I did not have access to their server, just an FTP portal
-						just an FTP portal to upload the files. The website was complete in April of 2024 and has
+						to upload the files. The website was complete in April of 2024 and has since been in use.
-						since been in use. This opportunity was a great learning experience and helped me to realize
+						This opportunity was a great learning experience and helped me realize that I do not want
-						that I do not want to be a front-end web developer.
+						to be a front-end web developer.
 					</p>
 					<p class="my-4 w-3/4 text-gray-200">
 						My most recent endeavor is a research project sponsored by Embry Riddle. I am working
 						with
 						<Link href="https://faculty.erau.edu/Seth.McNeill" text="Dr. Seth McNeill" />
 						to create an <span class="text-blue-300">Acoustic Drone Detection Sensor Network</span>.
-						Using just sound, we are able to detect drones with a nearly 95% accuracy rate. My
+						We are able to detect drones with just sound having a nearly 95% accuracy rate. My
 						portion of this project is the network infrastructure. I have developed an
 						<span class="text-blue-300"> Internet of Things (IoT)</span> network that connects all of
 						the sensors between a gateway. Any data collected by the sensors is sent to AWS where it
 						is processed and then stored locally on a server. This project has been an amazing experience
 						and has helped me to develop a strong understanding of IoT networks and the AWS ecosystem.
-						Furthermore, it has opened my eyes to the world of research and brought me close to many
+						Furthermore, it has opened my eyes to the world of research and has introduced me to many
-						amazing people.
+						bright individuals.
 					</p>
 				</div>
 			</div>